Design skilled for sure. Typography not so much. Your centered paragraph is causing the issue. Left align that information. If you have to center your typr learn to better set your current design without creating an upside triangle look to it. Other than that, this is quite good.
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this is the first idea for a t-shirt company I’m starting locally. I want it to be an ultra-simple e-commerce store with SUPER bright and eye-catching visuals to attract the young demographic I’m going for. I feel like my design skills have improved but my visual representation and presentation skills are lacking. How can I make this project pop out more? What’s missing in the presentation? All comments are appreciated!
Design skilled for sure. Typography not so much. Your centered paragraph is causing the issue. Left align that information. If you have to center your typr learn to better set your current design without creating an upside triangle look to it. Other than that, this is quite good.
The comment didnt load quite how I wanted it to, but in essence:
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this is the first idea for a t-shirt company I’m starting locally. I want it to be an ultra-simple e-commerce store with SUPER bright and eye-catching visuals to attract the young demographic I’m going for. I feel like my design skills have improved but my visual representation and presentation skills are lacking. How can I make this project pop out more? What’s missing in the presentation? All comments are appreciated!