Would like to see an injection of color – a blood red i would work – and despite agreeing with the other comments – I think the stylistic design has some very interesting elements that could be worked out – like making RPG stand out more – etc. Keep going – I think you have a great start and a working idea to expand on.
Right now I read it as:
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Splitting the “O” confuses me and the “R” is exact same as “P”, so you can’t read it as “RPG”.
It’s tor my tabletop RPG game. The original title is in polish, and can be translated to “The Ode of Blood & Gold RPG”. Tell me your thoughts!
Would like to see an injection of color – a blood red i would work – and despite agreeing with the other comments – I think the stylistic design has some very interesting elements that could be worked out – like making RPG stand out more – etc. Keep going – I think you have a great start and a working idea to expand on.